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Recent painting im working on .-. gah cant finish it any time soon... feeeel brutally sickkk OTL welp... hope ya guys like it... im going to attempt to finish this painting this time .-... wish me luck lol
.. also... can anyone come up with a better name for him xD?

ALSO, the first character of a series of characters I shall create!..
Flash is a member of a group called the Resistance (un-original title),

constructive criticism would be appreciated :)

Edit: Whoaaaa 400 views?!!?!?! thats crazy (for me) thanks a bunch guys :D :D :D i feel so special now :)
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Lots of action and movement, but some elements are getting lost. First there could be stronger separation of the figure from the background. Maybe with color. You've got the same greys in both grounds. This is classic composition stuff so any number of tricks will work.

As for the figure itself, I want to know how that far leg is positioned in space. It's looking kinda side view now when I feel like I'm looking down on the figure overall. You could square up the front leg too. Make sure that the thigh, knee, shin and foot are all working together and connecting with the pelvis. And that weapon thingy...put the disc in perspective.

I'd like to see that forward arm separate from the body. That and many of the details of the armor and weapons will pop more with stronger lighting, maybe two lights.

Good job on the background. They're hard to do.

Hope this helps. And don't pay to much attention to the star ratings.